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Would you let me know if you think this is close to professional (able to be published) writing? 1. yes 2, no 3. don’t care and any comments would be greatly appreciated_ Alma:I ask a girl for her pbone number and she gave it too me but when I ask her on a date she says [...]
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Toshia:
I'm 24 years old and my girlfriend is 18. We met each other two months ago and last night she came to visit me in my house for the first time.
(31 December 2018)

Inga:
Ok so I've known the girl for about 2 and a half months, made it official 8 days ago, here's a little description about how she acts when I'm with her.
(31 December 2018)

Ardis:
My boyfriend and I are happy together but when its us around other people we become more quiet around eachother.
(31 December 2018)

Ardis:
How to be more comfortable around boyfriend with people?
(31 December 2018)

Terisa:
Who won? My ex fwb or me?
(31 December 2018)

Terisa:
I slept with someone 20 years younger than him and made sure he knew about it.
(31 December 2018)

Terisa:
He always talked about other women to me.
(31 December 2018)

Frances:
How come Asian are so cool?
(31 December 2018)

Erna:
I told my bf i will not see my ex when i go down to see my family at the holidays but he showed up today?
(31 December 2018)

Erna:
Not telling him would eat me up inside.
(31 December 2018)