Do you enjoy stories?

I have written a couple. Here is one that I wrote not too long ago.Night around the table: It was warm tonight! The sky was clear and the stars were out, shining bright. I was headed to my friend Kare_ Celsa:There is no fever or sign of any other problem like a head cold.(18 November 2018) Celsa:He’s [...]
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Avelina:
I have bled through my pants more than once but a few hours later there is no blood.
(19 November 2018)

Avelina:
At first it was a light red then it went to dark red, and is now brown and thick.
(19 November 2018)

Avelina:
I have been spotting now for 10 days.
(19 November 2018)

Sheron:
Strict sister and guardianship?
(19 November 2018)

Sheron:
Every time I ask,she starts saying things.
(19 November 2018)

Sheron:
And how do I know if the guardianship isn't permanent?
(19 November 2018)

Sheron:
I'm slowly learning how to cook on my own and graduating highschool in 2019,how can I cope with this?
(19 November 2018)

Sheron:
I'm 18 and legally blind and in Florida.
(19 November 2018)

Sheron:
Up until now I've been stressed out about it.
(19 November 2018)

Sheron:
I did not want guardianship at all,but my older sister pretty much forced me to say yes to my attorney.
(19 November 2018)