Sparring partner - Intro

Ok this is just kind of the build up and looking for feedback (to long, to boring, just right not enough character development etc etc). Like most of the stuff I post its a first draft so please pardo_ Germaine:Why is all sex scenes in Game of Thrones in Doggy position?(14 August 2017) Malisa:High school guy girl [...]
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Delcie:
Am i a DICK because i don't know when my parents' anniversary is?
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
What to do about this situation with my ex?
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
How can this ever work when we both want different things?
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
Today he kissed me on the lips & said talk to you later.
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
Last night he said he wants to see me again.
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
He cares about me & is so affectionate, but he's the kind of guy who wants to be free from responsibility.
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
The reason we broke up is because he's not a relationship man.
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
I asked why he hadn't slept with anyone & he said he just likes his own space.
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
Last night he said he hasn't slept with anyone since me & he hasn't been interested in meeting someone & he's felt a bit low.
(13 August 2017)

Candy:
I stayed the night & today we went to the park & spend the day together.
(13 August 2017)