A couple of you asked what my list might look like

So here is a list of things that I might consider in creating a piece. To me it seemed magical, nearly alive. Your story should be more than the sum of its parts. I want to make them feel, keep them thinking. This can often be done by using settings that fascinate the reader, that [...]
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Siobhan:
It's so obvious to me and I don't understand why women can't see it.
(14 December 2016)

Siobhan:
As a guy, I can instantly and I mean literally instantly tell if a guy is talking to a girl because he is geniunely interested in he or if he is just trying to bang her.
(14 December 2016)

Adell:
Should this girl be kicked out if our school?
(14 December 2016)

Adell:
Do you think she should be expelled?
(14 December 2016)

Adell:
When the teacher writes her name on the board for a detension, she rubs it off behind the teacher's back and escapes getting punished.
(14 December 2016)

Adell:
If she argues with a teacher, she just sits on her phone the whole lesson and our class has to wait for a senior teacher to take her out of lesson.
(14 December 2016)

Adell:
She bullys kids and has probably had sex already.
(14 December 2016)

Adell:
She skips lessons whenever she wants and doesn't care about her gades at all.
(14 December 2016)

Adell:
She is 13. The teacher will say things like get off our phone is lesson and she argues with the teacher and refuses to let him take her phone and swears at him.
(14 December 2016)

Jeannie:
Clingy child; why is this child who only knows me a less 3 to 4 months so attached to me?
(14 December 2016)